new script for angus thongs sequel

script read through

In my read through i found that the dialogue made a basis of moving the story forward, we could see clearly that the characters new each other and that there is clear nemesis with the character lynsey against Georgia. From the scene we can see that there is still an issue between these two that has not been resolved from the original film. This indicates that these two characters are going to be the two driving characters who push the story forward. The message behind the film is shown differently through the different types of characters and relates into the macro area by showing different stereotypes of females and the stereotypical representations of teenage girls.
The speech seemed to flow quite clearly and the speech is "very believable of girls at that age' as quoted by Danica. I feel that the speech still could be tweaked slightly to get a more realistic view of the characters as well as helping to make the speech flow much better. There is a clear relationship between Georgia and her friends and then a clear tense relationship with Lynsey seeing as Georgia hid in a bush to hear the conversation. We both feel that there could be a clearer relationship between Robbie and Georgia so the idea of his cheating is more clear and does not seem like Georgia is jealous he has moved on, which it seems to look like at the moment in the script. I feel that this could be improved with building more of a relationship with Robbie to get a clear image of what the destruction is and also how this going to be portraying my MACRO area.